My narrative writing experiences began with fictional stories about me and my older brother, Stephen. During this point of my writing experience, I had decided that calling him "Dr. Dirty Teeth" was a great insult, and extremely funny.
When my mom corrected my writing and gave me advice about how to improve, this is what she said:
I followed her advice by adding very complicated emotions to all of my characters in the dentist office. It was an interesting month of writing.